Little Poem
The noise ringing in my ear/ the beat of the drum coming near/ the world spins/ the noise wins/ The heart beat that was nearly a hum/ now beats louder than a drum/ the adrenalin rush/ the silent hush/ sneaks the silent killer/ to destroy the peaceful miller (Not finished)
posted by Zebbie at 9:10 PM
7 Comments:
i love you poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And i'm not lying!!!!!!!!! I don't lie!!!
Sounds interesting...
What's the finish?
Wow, I really like it. Seriously. You have talent, my friend. (unlike SOME people *cough cough* like myself!)
I commented below, btw.
Okay, this isn't a bad song at all...just slightly depressing! And I liked the other one. :o(
Have fun with your snow daaaayyssss!!!
YOU CHANGED THE SONG!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!! NOT THAT I DIDN'T LIKE IT! :D
Wow Jordan. You do have Talent! Us girls were just talking about you messages on Gmail and stuff and how good they were! Thats very very cool man!
You don't have a song on here right now do you? Well I really like that song you sent -Cartel - The Minstrels. Its good! Seriouly.
Hey I love the picture of you! :) It made me laugh and smile. Still waiting on you to come on the ship to the world "down under"- Can't wait! ;) The doors always open.
see ya... somday. Take care
God bless,
~Me
Missing you! What up, J??? Are you freezing up in PA? When are you coming back to O-Town? At least for a visit? Drop me a line!
wow...i told u your poems were good!! see ya sunday!
lacey
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